tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post6608125581309560510..comments2023-11-03T03:53:31.447-05:00Comments on At The Farm...: dVerse~Poets Pub Terza Rima...Gailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-29382134913622275752013-05-15T23:25:18.067-05:002013-05-15T23:25:18.067-05:00I like it...a lot! I like it...a lot! DesertHenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14299030668463978206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-20794308329154200692013-05-12T12:44:48.132-05:002013-05-12T12:44:48.132-05:00A terrific blend of poetry and text.
=)A terrific blend of poetry and text. <br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-72530511822139169722013-05-12T10:10:55.672-05:002013-05-12T10:10:55.672-05:00I love how you are always up for a writing challen...I love how you are always up for a writing challenge. You bring a different slant to everything. It is enjoyable.Michaelehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05806716677546687464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-90381037586007024122013-05-12T09:53:19.334-05:002013-05-12T09:53:19.334-05:00I can picture the weightlessness of the dandelion ...I can picture the weightlessness of the dandelion seed, floating away in the wind - do not like that snake, but well put together and most enjoyed.LilliStJohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06771499579700164919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-10693348055761505522013-05-11T11:03:13.345-05:002013-05-11T11:03:13.345-05:00Cleverly done - like it a lot!
Anna :o]Cleverly done - like it a lot!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-82141864629947994172013-05-10T17:17:58.061-05:002013-05-10T17:17:58.061-05:00I thought you did good. I can't do it, that&#...I thought you did good. I can't do it, that's for sure! :)Wsprsweetly Of Cottageshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17990765326246470929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-20252515948953447322013-05-10T16:04:35.759-05:002013-05-10T16:04:35.759-05:00A minimalist terza rima! But the poem itself was ...A minimalist terza rima! But the poem itself was really good. I much prefer half rhymes to those of the moon/June variety!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-50116512218790481612013-05-10T12:29:39.159-05:002013-05-10T12:29:39.159-05:00This terza rima is new to me, and I like it. Unli...This terza rima is new to me, and I like it. Unlike the others, that black snake (I hope it is the harmless garden variety) can exist and catch as many rodents as possible!Susan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-30784874141760977842013-05-10T12:22:55.443-05:002013-05-10T12:22:55.443-05:00Nicely done, Gail. Nicely done, Gail. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-81182288796556997482013-05-10T10:42:40.826-05:002013-05-10T10:42:40.826-05:00Oh bravo for the terza rima! That's a tricky ...Oh bravo for the terza rima! That's a tricky one. And your pictures to go with it are terrific! Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-9393592818913702212013-05-10T09:37:59.099-05:002013-05-10T09:37:59.099-05:00Nicely written, Gail. I especially enjoyed the cle...Nicely written, Gail. I especially enjoyed the clever slant-rhymes on venom in the second stanza.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-22231584443232833722013-05-10T09:12:44.823-05:002013-05-10T09:12:44.823-05:00I'm glad you figured it out. And you didn'...I'm glad you figured it out. And you didn't use easy words either. Somebody was on the ball today.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05043376053971475659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-82636713583940219312013-05-10T08:17:05.754-05:002013-05-10T08:17:05.754-05:00This is great! New to your blog, and i love it!:)
...This is great! New to your blog, and i love it!:)<br /><br />~emily roseEmily Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173337813628626227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-32213079571953523792013-05-10T07:08:46.730-05:002013-05-10T07:08:46.730-05:00Wow Gail you did it again chills down my spine.......Wow Gail you did it again chills down my spine.... Awesome shots. Hug BButtons Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05029439906543077861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-57747081051348135832013-05-10T06:54:19.532-05:002013-05-10T06:54:19.532-05:00i can't tell if you did it right or not becaus...i can't tell if you did it right or not because when i read the definition it hurt my brain so bad i had to stop... and the aba and other letters really made my head hurt... i can say the words you wrote go well with the photos... this much i do know. MadSnapperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08163140037276496519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-46527488264928594242013-05-10T05:12:35.819-05:002013-05-10T05:12:35.819-05:00Very nice haiku.
Lynne xVery nice haiku.<br />Lynne xSketching with Dogshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270151161020999871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-70630300698545871822013-05-10T04:07:40.372-05:002013-05-10T04:07:40.372-05:00I liked . . . photo and poetic, . . .
Snake . . ....I liked . . . photo and poetic, . . . <br />Snake . . . not so much!Lynnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08723721131329150461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-39367909995216824772013-05-09T23:53:57.752-05:002013-05-09T23:53:57.752-05:00I like what you did, almost like a set of interloc...I like what you did, almost like a set of interlocking haigabrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-60579427702012257462013-05-09T22:57:22.906-05:002013-05-09T22:57:22.906-05:00oh nice...i love the image of floating away on a d...oh nice...i love the image of floating away on a dandelion seed...so weightless...wonderful pics as wellClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-74926915596529676302013-05-09T22:43:07.547-05:002013-05-09T22:43:07.547-05:00Don't know about what you said up there for de...Don't know about what you said up there for definition, but I like the pictures, Gail.<br />Have a great Friday!LindaGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12203719919661519350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-52088422750624471022013-05-09T22:37:57.190-05:002013-05-09T22:37:57.190-05:00Snakes are not a good thing for sure. I think you&...Snakes are not a good thing for sure. I think you've done a nice job of using the form to make music out of this event.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-31859504907055793142013-05-09T21:44:45.856-05:002013-05-09T21:44:45.856-05:00Interesting array of interlocking rhymes. The vers...Interesting array of interlocking rhymes. The verses could stand alone, but the chain unites the progression.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-65464097918232030402013-05-09T20:16:14.497-05:002013-05-09T20:16:14.497-05:00Enjoyed each of your stanzas and its accompanying ...Enjoyed each of your stanzas and its accompanying picture. Wouldn't want to meet that snake!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-64014177572439133822013-05-09T19:54:20.143-05:002013-05-09T19:54:20.143-05:00Well, hell on the farm today I guess!Well, hell on the farm today I guess!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-90301228887227389002013-05-09T19:04:38.685-05:002013-05-09T19:04:38.685-05:00ha nice....gotta watch out for those snakes in the...ha nice....gotta watch out for those snakes in the grass...they will take out your ankles....def like the second two stanzas all the more...the transforming butterfly...and the hey if it take s a little rebelling...i rather like dandelions...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com