tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post8968793352736751240..comments2023-11-03T03:53:31.447-05:00Comments on At The Farm...: The Mag, Dire ConsequencesGailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-69878134567293730032012-12-06T21:06:23.274-06:002012-12-06T21:06:23.274-06:00Oh, the playfulness muted the tragedy in this piec...Oh, the playfulness muted the tragedy in this piece. It reminded me of a nursery rhyme which hides some cruel thing behind the lilting words. This is very well done. <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-50451973807167003552012-12-03T17:38:47.613-06:002012-12-03T17:38:47.613-06:00I think you've shown us metronomes bring out t...I think you've shown us metronomes bring out the worst in everyone! Fun rhyme and meter really highlights your very serious subject matter.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-8612644493167101342012-12-03T14:36:34.518-06:002012-12-03T14:36:34.518-06:00I love the way this prompt takes us all different ...I love the way this prompt takes us all different places on a similar themeLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-929086481922726972012-12-03T12:03:24.750-06:002012-12-03T12:03:24.750-06:00Uh-oh. (giggling at Irene's comment)Uh-oh. (giggling at Irene's comment)Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-7396496083156723042012-12-03T08:47:47.595-06:002012-12-03T08:47:47.595-06:00People are always getting their heads bashed in ov...People are always getting their heads bashed in over here. Is it a secret desire you have? Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05043376053971475659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-59931470930189093992012-12-02T22:44:52.095-06:002012-12-02T22:44:52.095-06:00well done...thanks for sharingwell done...thanks for sharingWaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-91984156131373857902012-12-02T19:27:26.944-06:002012-12-02T19:27:26.944-06:00Samacked that down, yeah.Samacked that down, yeah.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-52732411629054634762012-12-02T18:55:29.613-06:002012-12-02T18:55:29.613-06:00Lordy, I'm the only one that said the "S&...Lordy, I'm the only one that said the "S" word! Oops!Wsprsweetly Of Cottageshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17990765326246470929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-84716428012545165282012-12-02T18:54:22.574-06:002012-12-02T18:54:22.574-06:00Ohhhhhh... Is this about sex? I could hardly remem...Ohhhhhh... Is this about sex? I could hardly remember how to spell it..or..do I just have a dirty mind. Probably the latter. :)Wsprsweetly Of Cottageshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17990765326246470929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-36581621134975258902012-12-02T17:21:17.067-06:002012-12-02T17:21:17.067-06:00That is a rhythm that needed to end. It is a stran...That is a rhythm that needed to end. It is a strange combination. Reads playfully, but a very serious subject. I felt guilty enjoying itMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-2633407065723580572012-12-02T14:43:23.766-06:002012-12-02T14:43:23.766-06:00timely tall tale of tick tocking... timely tall tale of tick tocking... MadSnapperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08163140037276496519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-73735337524315240932012-12-02T12:40:38.631-06:002012-12-02T12:40:38.631-06:00a timely piece that's for sure.
Well done!a timely piece that's for sure.<br />Well done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-64439039769201270492012-12-02T12:40:29.823-06:002012-12-02T12:40:29.823-06:00a timely piece that's for sure.
Well done!a timely piece that's for sure.<br />Well done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-28575020058530783362012-12-02T11:49:44.045-06:002012-12-02T11:49:44.045-06:00A serious subject treated with great effect.A serious subject treated with great effect.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-55364224363569288672012-12-02T11:48:42.537-06:002012-12-02T11:48:42.537-06:00I'm always up for a bit of romance... and head...I'm always up for a bit of romance... and head-bashing...Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-79237057373833915032012-12-02T11:36:10.871-06:002012-12-02T11:36:10.871-06:00Well written, though very deep and dark.Well written, though very deep and dark.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-258448989791520652012-12-02T11:17:33.647-06:002012-12-02T11:17:33.647-06:00Oh, my... metronomes can really bring out some kil...Oh, my... metronomes can really bring out some killer ideas.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-28096506516916860162012-12-02T10:29:11.656-06:002012-12-02T10:29:11.656-06:00Dark and playful . Look out Steven King you have s...Dark and playful . Look out Steven King you have some real competition here ! Country Gal https://www.blogger.com/profile/08693944554850315123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-34665443176173649792012-12-02T10:13:44.117-06:002012-12-02T10:13:44.117-06:00hahahahahaha Dark, playful, funny, serious--- You ...hahahahahaha Dark, playful, funny, serious--- You are always taking us back and forth in an intriguing way!Empty Nesterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14060983954463697344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-91120242622479204952012-12-02T10:06:59.318-06:002012-12-02T10:06:59.318-06:00there you go..back to the dark...haha...oh my...i ...there you go..back to the dark...haha...oh my...i think his eye got stuck on an arm...smiles.....lol...this has a fun rhythm to it that makes it all the more...intriguing...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7645454613980668198.post-62442243317212789122012-12-02T10:03:40.359-06:002012-12-02T10:03:40.359-06:00Ohhh... I love the playfulness of this with the se...Ohhh... I love the playfulness of this with the serious subject! Great contrast! Poor Fred - got what he deserved!Dreaminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02113432418609414054noreply@blogger.com