River Irwell by R.A.D. Stainforth
She had been carrying water from the river when the camp was attacked. Hiding she knew there was nothing she could do to save her family. It was over almost as soon as she heard the war cries.
With nothing but a bucket and the brown calico dress she wore, she quietly swiftly pushed the canoe into the water. She lay hidden in the canoe as it floated down the river, her only escape.
The trees and the sky were her view for miles as she silently cried for her lost family.
Day turned to night and she viewed the stars, allowing the river to carry her where it would.
She heard children playing in the distance and hoped maybe she had reached a settlement. The current moved toward the bank here. Exhausted with no paddle she simply lay in the canoe. Her fate was in the hands of the river.
Splashing, splashing, then hands on the canoe pulling her toward the shore. Feeling the canoe dragging on solid ground she struggled to sit after so many hours of hiding curled in the bottom of the canoe.
Rising, there were tepees as far as the eye could see. From a distance she heard the same war cry. She answered it with her own screams.
28 comments:
Oooooo! I was THERE!
More, please! :)
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That was so good Gail! My heart was actually beating faster. Can't wait to see what happens to her...
nice tale, Gail. I like your calico girl, but was kind of sad for her fate. Have a great Sunday on the Farm. Laurel
A temporary reprieve or worse?
From solace to disharmony....well crafted!
rel
My goosebumps haven't gone down yet! This is truly a wonderful, thought- provoking, emotion packed piece. Well done.
So captivating! Gave me a chill at the end!
Well that sucks. SHe should have stayed in the woods.
Nicely done!
your descriptions really capture the sense of what goes on at the river
the river
Yikes. That was quite a ride.
Well done, Gail!
=)
That's me, too. Oh wow.
Great job, Gail!
You have me . . .i can't imagine that fear, suffering, sorrow . . . Please finish.
Oh, I loved reading this :) Wonderful!
Have a great Sunday!
That was fantastic! I would keep reading for sure!
That was great! Omen really, really great. I love flash fiction.
oh dang...nice twist in the ending...hope she does not like that hair too awful much...
you write to captivate...very well done. I cannot wait to read more.
Thanks for stopping by~
BlessYourHeart
I love it.
T
Ye gods and little fishies!!!
Oh my, what an adventurous story, so nicely told! Excellent!
Oh no you did-int just leave us hanging like that!
awesome! love it!..
JJRod'z
Somehow I hope she lived happily ever after anyway.
Needless to say...she had a bad hair day! Whew, I wasn't expectin' that endin' for sure!
Yet another great write Miss Gail.
Have yourself a magnificent week my friend!!! :o)
My Native American DNA is tingling...
Oh Gail, I do love your wee stories. You sure do tell a good short story and it is fun to see a new post from you, cause I never know what you might write next. I think you would make a great fiction writer - we could give you the name "Gail King" - smile, smile, wink, wink
Keep it up cause it sure is great.
Ahhh, back among her own people at last , nothing to fear here, She Who Dances With Wolves !
A river adventure of long ago, eh?
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