Had this lady walking on air
Crossing the ceiling she frowned
She was up but her dress stayed down.
What can I do? She looked around
She could clean the ceiling just like before
But now she could sweep the dust to the floor.
Sweeping to her heart's content
The floor was quickly covered with lint.
The ceiling was finished
Her shoes held her tight
Her legs were burning from the heel's height.
Turning to go from ceiling to wall
The shoes came off.
She died from the fall.
16 comments:
Oh no, till death tore her apart from her dear shoes! Great centus...I like the upside down switch!
Love it, Gail!! That's taking housecleaning a little too far!
And yes, high heels really wrecked my feet! Rod was sad to see them go, but he really had no say in the matter!!
Oh Gail, that was funny....glad her dress didn't fall :)
ha,ha Gail - This is way toooo funny - I laughed out loud at the end. You are good girl. Keep em coming. Thanks for this - I shall send a link to my neice - she will love this. Cheers
That's really taking cleaning to the extreme lol. Too bad all that work ended badly.
Very funny! until she died, that is. ;)
Thanks for reaffirming my contention that housework is deadly!
Great job!
Apparently, she just needed a little more practice and shoes that stayed on better. Too bad she died on her first attempt. People should always get a second chance. Maybe she'll do better in heaven with her wings on. xox
How sad that she did all that good work for naught...durn shoes!
I think I'd like a pair
of Golden Anywheres...
minus the fall, of course.
;)
fabulous, absolutely fabulous!!!
I was laughing out loud! Great centus. laurie
Did not expect the sad twist at the end. Funny till then...
LOL, very funny poem. I love picturing her walking on the ceiling and then falling off the walls
visiting from Jenny's
I knew there was a reason I did not like house cleaning!
~Naila Moon
http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/05/dressed-for-successa-story.html
Gail!
Bravo! Bravo!
This is the best little use of a picture prompt. EVER!
Love your creativity here!
Brilliant!
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