| image by Francesca
Woodman with alterations. |
The lady arrived covered with kelp
carrying a shell phone to call for help
The first man she did meet
Tried to force a peek
What an impudent whelp!
What an impudent whelp!
| image by Francesca
Woodman with alterations. |
22 comments:
What a joy to come across the word 'whelp'! Thank you. :)
I adore you! Tempt us all with a provocative image and then solve the problem by eliminating the nude completely! I love this piece. Good lesson. Well done.
Haha. Wonderful little ditty, Gail! :o)
very good, excellent in fact. i just can't do this at all.
ha i hope she hit him with the shell...men, what can you do...smiles.
brava, well said
I hope the whelp got what was coming to him...lol.
A shell phone...hee!
There you go...punning around.
Here's a creative use of the prompt.
Impudent whelk! Ha-ha, I made a pun!
thanks for joining in!
Like your fun perspective ~
Funny.... Love the "Shell Phone"....ha ha
Hugs,
Betsy
We were in your area of Arkansas last week ---when it was over 100 degrees and VERY dry... The closest we got to Melbourne was Mountain View... The next time we come that way, maybe we can get together for lunch...
Hugs,
Betsy
A lovely limerick, full of fun and impudent characters. Thank you for sharing this light hearted take, Gail.
:) I like that one- great mag!
That's a great one - good for you!
You always make me smile... your poetry is fun!
More and more those pieces of communication and sound are taking over! Nice piece!
Witty with clever wordplay. Shell phone sounds like Sean Connery's cellphone.
I love the 'shell phone'.
where can i buy a shell phone? hehehe... just kidding...
bravo! love it!
JJRod'z
So clever, Gail. And an excellent way to handle this prompt!
=D
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