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Thursday, August 25, 2016

Whirligig

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I've missed the challenge of Sunday's Whirligig.  Each week a picture with words are listed.  The words are pushed around, rearranged, and molded into something different with every one's take. This prompt is from Wednesday August 24th. I'm a little late. I always enjoy these.  My self appointed goal is to combine the words using as few extra words as possible and still make sense.  I hope I've accomplished that.

Senseless, harsh, silly songs cry out scornfully, 
"Smite the old dreams!"
Absolution promotes dishonesty to silence forever 
The serene infant that was our great nation.

12 comments:

Lynne said...

Good one Gail . . .i've missed your Whirlygig moments . . .

LindaG said...

That is pretty good, Gail.
You are very good with words. Thank you!

Hope you all have a blessed Sunday, Gail. ♥

Ginny Hartzler said...

This is extremely clever!

only slightly confused said...

Wow...that took some thought to put together. Great job.

eileeninmd said...

Hello, you are clever! I have missed your whirligigs.

Happy Sunday, enjoy your new week ahead!

Sandra said...

Perfect. You did it

Arkansas Patti said...

If there is a prize for the fewest extra words used and still make sense, you have it. Well done.

Lee said...

Well done...:)

Lowcarb team member said...

Now that is what I call ...

GOOD

Very well done indeed

All the best Jan

Weekend-Windup said...

Looks perfect!

Susan Anderson said...

You really did well with that challenge. Maybe I'll try it sometime. It seems like a fun one…a puzzle, right?

=)

Josie Two Shoes said...

"Absolution promotes dishonesty", Amen to that!! What is wrong goes unpunished and in fact lauded, and what we once knew as right is either ridiculed or ignored. I fear for where this will lead us, and I hope I don't live to see the outcome. Very nicely done, Gail!

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