Creative attempt for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
Some would think
I'm the strong one
You forever
Hold me up
In your arms
In your heart
I am the weak one
Encouraged
Supported
By your strength
I topple
You catch me
Opposites are day and night
They make a fine pair
And so do we
Apart
We are haunted
And hungry
For the next time...
23 comments:
Very nicely done once again.
Have a fabulous day. :)
Not opposite - you compliment each other!
Like the photo.
I love this Gail, I can relate to it well. Without them, where would we be? Lost, I am sure.
Well written... and so true!
you are both blessed.
love it and it goes with the photo perfectly.
Beautiful!
This is true for SM and me as well. Thanks, this is lovely. Oma Linda
It aches to read this. It is how I feel, and how lost we each would be when the other passes on. Lovely, Gail.
Beautifully done.
Your love of nature and the use of emotive language is stunning here. Thank you so much for writing! :)
Great words and from the heart, too!...:)JP
Thanks - your thoughts caused me to stop and contemplate my own life and see the truths in what you say.
Ooh. Strange, but nice, too, Gail.
Hope you all have a wonderful Sunday. ♥
This is quite lovely. Difficult to see ourselves as others do.
Well written!!
Nice picture too :-)
All I can do is smile at your beautiful post... :-)
Excellent . . . in style and partnering . . .
The last six words capture everything the poem is about - we encourage and support each other together - what more could one want and what a world it would be if it were widespread. Love this.
Sweet tribute to your man?? Very nice, Gail
This is so beautiful, Gail! What a tribute!
That is so beautiful and romantic!
Lynne x
Very sweet. :)
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