Am back, Gail. I just read a memoir called When Broken Glass Floats, about the life of a young girl and her family under the Khmer Rouge. An amazing life, and she rose out of that life of starvation, slave labor and oppression to prove that our spirits do rise.........your lines about the broken glass made me think of that book.
19 comments:
You really brought it full circle!
Very interesting circular poem. Thanks for sharing.
really like how you can pick any word as the start of a phrase just by stringing it to the next line. very creative!
I love the feel of word association this has. Very nice, very.
an amazing loop!
This has a really cool structure.
What a great use of form. This one is a departure for you. It's good to try new things!
=)
That's beautiful!
Lynne x
The karma moon on broken glass.. yes I can feel that feeling.
the moon will always catch up
focused implementation
I agree: an interesting look at cycles and connections!
I love the karma moon! Beautiful.
Life is a ball! It will just go on! Only some concerted efforts will make it detour or deflect a little! Nicely Gail!
Hank
Am back, Gail. I just read a memoir called When Broken Glass Floats, about the life of a young girl and her family under the Khmer Rouge. An amazing life, and she rose out of that life of starvation, slave labor and oppression to prove that our spirits do rise.........your lines about the broken glass made me think of that book.
Circular in sounds and happenings. Brilliant.
That broken glass cuts such vivid imagery.
Very intriguing.
Liked your creating . . .
This is both clever and full of truth (some joyful, some dark). Very nicely done.
Post a Comment