a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Sunday, December 7, 2014

Pretty On Pink

her eyes
screamed
no one heard
but
on the base board
her blood wept
a name

A few words for Magpie Tales

24 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

gruesome fate awaits her

Sandra said...

she is being dragged backwards by the walking dead.

McGuffy Ann Morris said...

Indeed. Often the tale, and the eyes always know.

Country Wife said...

lovely

LindaG said...

Wow.

Kay said...

indeed..wow..didn't see that coming!!

Berowne said...

Beautifully written...

Björn Rudberg said...

The blood wept a name.. wonder if that's what the forensics found.

Kathe W. said...

I almost went in your direction, but took a hard left to the more humouous side! Very well done- excellent!

Truedessa said...

Wow, a bit chilling..

Buttons said...

HUGS to your family. I like the pink. B

kaykuala said...

Sense of abandonment very apparent. Nicely Gail!

Hank

Irish Gumbo said...

"Her blood wept a name…"
Surely, the coroner must be a poet.
Startling, eerie, good write.

Anita said...

Moving & chilling tale.
Hope no one has this fate...

Magaly Guerrero said...

My heart just broke a little...

sreeja harikrishnan said...

so well captured....

Sandy said...

She loves pink and had to get closer??

Saucy Kodz said...

She died at the hands of her killer. He looked deep into her eyes, hearing a sigh from her lips with her last breath - then gently laid her on the floor behind the couch, with only her eyes able to watch him leave through the front door.
That's all folks.....

Uppal said...

She is sad, but not down in the dumps.

Susan Anderson said...

I see you're back to your old tricks again…

;)

Wayne said...

Well done

Lynne said...

Well . . .

Karen S. said...

Yes, WooHoo you were first! I do believe I think she is pretty on pink, well that which we can see! But oh my no, blood, did I see it no! Goodness shall she survive this or......... ? !

Tess Kincaid said...

Screaming eyes, indeed...

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