OUT
of words
of funds
of solutions
OUT
of dreams
of hope
of time
OUT
strike three
shoulders to the mat
cupboard's bare
OUT
washed out
smashed up
sliced open
OUT
dry
broken
empty
25 comments:
when the day seems as dire as that, one can hope only for a new day.
Quite a melancholic list dear!
i love number 2 photo, with all those oak thingy that make me sneeze and my eyes itch.. over and OUT... heh heh heh
Nonsense. Down, maybe, but never out. ;-)
Hoping the anxiety burns OUT by the time we stop to make this list ...
Quite vivid and intense.. loved it :)
xoxo
Nicely done. I like the staccato feel of this.
That really conjoured up some negative feelings when I read that - well done.
Lynne x
I agree with Tex, time to move onto a new day..Wishing you a happy Memorial Day Weekend!
I know the feeling! Great job with this.
Hope once it's out there is things to enjoy..
Liked the way you'd set this OUT
Have a good weekend
All the best Jan
Well done, Gail.
*hugs* :-)
Have a blessed weekend. ♥
out, out, out of that
much love...
OUT of words to say thank you... ;-)
Big hugs to you!
But, also out in nature.....where one gets replenished when one is OUT of all those things on your list!
I definitely know the meaning of "out"...only too well. Food for thought.
So..hi there! How the heck are you?
:)
you've been peering in my cupboards? ~
Great set of words - I keep trying my hand at poems, but always end up back at prose.
Cheers - Stewart M - Melbourne
When the creek bed is dry and broken, one can only hope for rain, as in last photo. Words put to great use with even greater photos. Like this. H to M n all :)
Gail,
Nice!
Nice one for the prompt- you are really getting good with these poems! Hey, I don't want to scare you or anything, but I think it's going to rain from now to Christmas. I think I'm going to have to go prepper pretty soon and start stocking up on groceries.
The definitive list on that topic!
Yeah, I can relate for sure.
Great piece . . .
I will come over and load up the cupboards!
IN . . .
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