She had always loved Nature far better than people. In crowds she wore her
mask with
teeth fixed in a
radiant smile never
revealing the deep
longing in her
bones to follow the
river track to the
shallows and simply
collapse. Nature always
reeled her back .
This time, she had decided, she would stay, never to
emerge again.
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18 comments:
perfect poem for this image. I was rather irreverent.
Yes, I can identify somewhat with that feeling!
You made wonderful use of all those words. Very lovely!
Lynne x
The freedom of letting go... and the sadness of loss.
Great take on the prompts!
Pretty poem. I feel the same way sometimes, loving nature. Have a happy day and new week ahead!
Well handled; beautifully written.
I think it is easy to love nature as nature offers us so much, it gives and gives and humans seems to just take and take..hopefully, we will not destroy what keeps us alive.
Nice take on the prompt.
I this chaotic world we often neglect the nature despite of knowing its importance in our life.
Excellent post with the words you were given. You know how to make one feel each of these words the way they were written. Very well done - Bravo to you my friend.
Well done combining the two prompts. Nicely done.
As we all eventually must , cheers
You married the challenges beautifully, Gail.
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I feel much the same way. Beautifully written and clever use of the words.
Yes, beautiful union of two prompts. Gorgeous write...nature is a siren. I heed its call often
But how she will be missed
Nicely blended words and image!
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