a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Saturday, October 24, 2015

MLMM's Freedom and The Doors

Loop Poetry

Freedom

Blocked by walls
walls with doors
doors opened to freedom
freedom to explore


Classic rock
birthed easily
by The Doors
rock's "rock god"
Jim Morrison left too soon
the music lives on

7 comments:

Mama Zen said...

Nothing finer than Jim Morrison in his heyday.

rallentanda said...

Both forms written effortlessly.Well done !

rhymeswithbug.com said...

lovely tribute!

Plowing Through Life (Martha) said...

Jim Morrison definitely left too soon. He was so young!

eileeninmd said...

Great post, I love the The Doors and Jim Morrison! Happy Sunday, enjoy your new week!

Jae Rose said...

Two wonderful poems beautifully synchronised...freedom to explore is key - I wonder if Jim Morrison actually felt free once he got famous and he lived what he thought rather than just thinking it/expressing it artistically..27 is far to young to lose such a talent..or solve such a puzzle perhaps too

Lynne said...

NICE . . .
Both . . .

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