Old Bank Street, Manchester, UK by R.A.D. Stainforth
Sing back a frame
That did exist
A fiery re-call becomes
A chance to repair
To craft a new deal
From time gone
Add your wishes
This moment
Like a boat's sail
Will billow full again
Attempting a triple prompt...
24 comments:
sing back = second chance.. the past is gone the future is waiting...
Remarkable work! Inspired :)
xoxo
My favorite lines are....
'this moment
like a boat's sail
will billow full again.'
I can really picture this, Gail.
fill those sails with wishes and a song!!!
I want to set sail in exactly that way too... wonderful.
You are just multi-talented..I couldn't string those words into a poem if I tried! Good one!
second chances so few in occurance; nicely captured your wishes here
have a beautiful Sunday
much love...
I love the billowing sail, too, Gail. Lovely.
You created a nice vision here, my friend. Thank you.
Best line for me: A fiery re-call becomes
A chance to repair...Always calls forth home.
I love how you weave the words, Gail. :-)
Oh I love how you took me back to a second chance...wonderful!
How we wish we could sing a back a frame. Lucky are those who get this chance but usually the die is set. Well written Gail.
Nice job with the two prompts. I would like my wishes to set sail.
I love the optimism in that last line!
Very good Gail . . ,
I especially liked . . .
A fiery re-call becomes
A chance to repair
To craft a new deal
Well it sounds better when it is with the rest . . .
It reads like a captured moment in time...
the first two lines capture the essence of the poem and i'm amazed how in such short space all those words fit so well ....
As they always, love is sweeter the second time around.
What a wistfully wise poem
Full sails means another adventure awaits!! Loved this, Gail :)
you seem to do well with with this word stuff
Zq
ah yes. hope floats
I'm amazed at how wonderfully these words fuse together!
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