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In the clear
To avoid
The muddy
Turbulence
That is
Her life
Never looking up
She strolls
Splashing
In tall boots
Pretending
This is real
Not the murky water
In this moment
She walks on rocks
Never disturbing
Silt nor mud
Nor secrets
And thinks
This is how it should be
16 comments:
Perfect!
Powerful and deep!
You have this one, right on!
In a word, fascinating...
She respects others...what more could you want?...:)JP
And thinks that's how it should be:) brilliant. Hug B
Treading softly - very well done Gail
5 *****'s
great job, fits the photo perfectly.
nice take on this image!
I like this one. I can relate.
This was well crafted some deep thoughts here. In this moment she walks on rocks.
The photo and the words---some thoughtful writing. Excellent.
Oh I liked this, ( I bet Tess likes and will relate too) and I think we were both somewhat on track in our thoughts. I felt the desire to add some extra photos as well!
Yes, she does rather seem to be gliding , doesnt she ?
A lot of poetry this week has her walking on stones, Very cool it goes with the prompt..... I like your brevity and American Indian prayer.
Very nice
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