a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Sunday, July 5, 2015

Nowhere


Misty world of silence
place beyond people
the beginning of everything

A nowhere spot without end
the only talking I hear
is inside my head again

9 comments:

Sandra said...

wow, good job and i like how you did not use a lot of other words, but mostly the prompt words

eileeninmd said...

You are good, a great writing and use of the prompt words. Have a happy day and new week ahead!

Jae Rose said...

Sometimes those voices are help..other times a hinderance i feel that perhaps on this occasion they may have interrupted the silence a little too early? Sometimes introspection and the freedom to think is a welcome gift...

annell said...

Sometimes the voices are all there is. Nicely done!

McGuffy Ann Morris said...

I like this one, especially the second stanza.

C.C. said...

Oooh....I can relate to this.....!

Cressida de Nova said...

Impressed by the brevity and still using all the words. Clever!

rhymeswithbug said...

Clap, clap! Well said.

Susan Anderson said...

Great job with this challenge. Not such an easy thing to do!

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