Lay on a log
First they were silent
Then came dialog
Shrooms spoke first
Offering a prophetic scene
Crystal counter-offered
With a clarifying dream
Neither vision was truthful
Both of them lied
Each could deliver a trip
But it could be the last ride
For Poetry Jam: Poetic Visions
28 comments:
Ah snap- I love it!
hahaha...um, yeah...i know nothing of what you speak of...ok, it was a long time ago....ahem.
Love the idea of a mushroom-crystal dialog on a log!! Love the creativity in this!!
I bthought this was creatively good!
too funny. :)
Ha1 Would ne an interesting conversation.
Although I can't spell. Should be Ha! and be not ne. Oopsy : )
Yet another great poem.
Talk about final trips :-)
This is so clever! Smiles....
Made me smile and has a lot of hidden truth. Well done.
Oh Gail I love this you are such a great poet. Hug B
Neat poem Gail with dialogue between shrooms n crystal. Smiled while reading.
and I will just say what Terri said
Ah snap- I love it!
Oh, yes... hallucinations indeed!
you make one wonder what the conversation would be like if you could sit on that log with them.
a good one :)
Hot damn....you sure are good at this. Oma Linda
This is excellent. You do this so very well.
Have a terrific day. ☺
Far out, man!
This is so clever!
Both told lies! I'll never trust a 'room again.
Very, very clever! But very, very true! Loved the poem. Loved the rhyme!
Amusing and clever use of the photo!
Well done. You must keep getting better at this.
=)
This is very creative, Gail!
Wow this one is so witty!! Who would have thought of such a conversation :)
Never saw a crystal like that before. Great photo and great poem, Gail. :-)
Very clever word play here, loved it! The photo, as always, was awesome too. You have a gift for serving as the camera's eye!
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