Playing with the poets
Three poems from three different shelves
Silence In The Snowy Fields
A Long Way Down
The Witch In Every Woman
Turning Life Into Fiction
Inside Outside Upside Down
No More Dead Dogs
Trapped At The Bottom Of The Sea
Titantic Crossing
And believe me
Even this poor attempt
Was very difficult.
23 comments:
oh imagine the crossing being a class trip....all the more tragic...
ha, the first one made me guffaw...
I love the humor here, you found some great titles to blend together into fun poetry.
On the last one, worst class trip ever, I was laughing ~ Such fun to read your titles, smiles ~
I thought all three were excellent;and I know it isn't easy. Good work!
You have a lovely collection x
you did it, this one was TOUGH
Nice! I used to be a reading teacher, so I have lots of children's books. I thought about using those and now might just have to go back and write another one.
I think you did great! I loved them all!
I think you did well, the first set of books titles were interesting...
You did well, I also liked the first list.
You must be a teacher...
Ah, I love that you took on this challenge and ACED it! Like especially the final stanza.
The Witch In Every Woman
Turning Life Into Fiction... so cool.. and yeah.. it is more difficult than one would think.. gave me a hard time as well doing this
I enjoyed yours! I am trying now-it is harder than it looks :D
I understand "Silence In The Snowy Fields" - Love what you did with the book titles. Kinda cool actually and I think I would read #1 Worst Class Trip Ever :)
Brilliant--- and a lot of humor in these little verses.
Love the second one, nicely done.
Love the prompts and your creating . . .
Very inventive - I will be staring at our book titles now, LOL.
Lynne x
Lots of dark humour here - my favourite kind ... smiles. And that would have been the #1 worst class trip ever!
Lots of dark humour here - my favourite kind ... smiles. And that would have been the #1 worst class trip ever!
Liked the way you showed the images in stanzas too.
Very versatile phrasing.
I can understand the difficulty in trying to find meaning within the constrains of book titles, but here you've managed to find a subtle, dark humor to animate all of these brief aphoristic compositions. Well done.
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