in jeans and pick up trucks
with crow's feet and smiles
etched forever in their faces
I dream of men
who say "ma'am",
"thank you kindly"
and "howdy"
as they lift their hat
I dream of men
with heads full of dreams
and eyes full of hope
men that slap their hat
against their pants leg
to leave some dust outside
I dream of men
who whisper to horses,
dogs,
children,
and ladies
I dream of men
who always carry a lariat,
a gun, a knife, lollipops,
and a willingness to help
in their pickup trucks
I dream of men
who know how to work,
laugh, love, and live
with every ounce of themselves
leaving no doubt you are the only one
in their dreams
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34 comments:
Happy Monday! Well I can't say I dream of men, but I liked the poem regardless :)
So do I ........
On horses for me instead of the pick up trucks lol ! Have a good day !
This sounds like a fella I know down in Arkansas - sure suits him I'd say. Great job - I like this poem.
I wonder if such men are really just a dream.. maybe that's why they are dreams..
Great poem Gail! Reminds me of a combination of kind old fellows in my neck of the woods.
nice description Gail..Dream-Man..sigh. ....
Sounds like you are dreaming of your husband!
I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.. this is what i would write if i knew how... this dream man was what i dreamed of from age 13 up...
Are there still such men out there? I hope so.
:-)
How on earth have I missed you all this time....never mind....I'm here now.
They grow those cowboy types in Texas. It's so refreshing!
I don't dream of men, but I know what you mean. I've seen these men in movies and enjoy the romance of that strength. Nicely parsed, image by image, to build a man.
Amen, Gail. These men are few and far between...and very special.
Hi Gail, Thanks so much for commenting on my blog today. I have missed you... Hope you are keeping Arkansas in ONE HAPPY PIECE just for us.. We love that state SO much!!!!
I didn't find me a cowboy---but I did find the 'bestest' guy in the world for me: smart, compassionate, loving, and he drives a Prius!!!!!!
Great poem...
Hugs,
Betsy
romantic and ruggedly touching. :)
Beautifully penned. I enjoyed reading this. :)
A great tribute to those type of men who observe gentility and manners. And, cowboys are the best image of that.
Oh, by the way, I listed you as a blogger I would miss if you stopped blogging.
Me too! A most perfect dream to live!
wonderful and inspiring words to aspire to live by, especially if your a man.
i enjoy the expectation of making every moment count especially when it entails the love of anything or anyone.
I believe he is already with you, the dream man. I esp love ' men
who whisper to horses,
dogs,
children,
and ladies' stanza. Much Love x
These are the men from Back In the Day. I can SEE him, in your poem, slapping his hat against his leg, a little shy.......well done.
When you find that fella, see if he has an older brother.
You sound like you know what you are taking about! Lets go to a rodeo!
When you find a man like that, you have to rope him in, and never let him go! What a wonderful poem! I'm so glad I found you on Susan Kane's blog!
Julie
I really love it, thanks for making me smile.
The world needs more men like this! Well done.
What a lovely poem.....I'm sure there are some of those men milling about in society nowadays....but I know they are fewer and further between.
An old view of men, and quite sexist in my opinion. But still politeness is always needed more.
Politeness and chivalry is not dead.
Creative! I enjoyed reading this!
P.S. Interesting - but on my blog reading list just now I found 3 blogs posts, almost in a row, about dreams. I hope I have a good dream tonight. And pleasant dreams to you.
Ah...a cowboy, a gentleman...beautiful dream
I, too, dream of men who are real and unafraid to show it!
This sounds like a wonderful song, Gail!
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