a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Thursday, November 6, 2014

Me and the Shadows...

For Tale Weaver's Prompt #33
Hypothetic Realist@Deviant Art 
i keep the lamps low
so the shadows
are not so clear
people say I'm addled
and keep me here
i keep the lamps low
to chase the shadows away
The Watchers never see
all the shadows
that keep me company
i keep the lamps low

10 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

Its like hiding our emotions from the world.

mindlovemisery said...

Powerful repetition, there is something both haunting and lonely about this beautifully done

Buttons said...

LOVE LOVE this Gail. Hug B

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Wow Gail this is incredible. I wish you an awesome weekend!

Sandra said...

I keep the lamps low to, but it is because i am afraid of the dark.. can't sleep in a dark room, and also i like the way a room looks with lamps low when i am awake..

TexWisGirl said...

i like it. eerie and creepy but i like it.

T. Powell Coltrin said...

Very mood provoking. Gave me chills which of course I like.

PS I keep the lamps turned high to keep the shadows away.

georgeplaceblog said...

It has a touch of madness to it and that is what makes it so real.

Lynne said...

Kinda scary . . . those shadows!
Good one!

lovehappynotes.com said...

I'm get more meaning from each read. Great Write.

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