For Tale Weaver's Prompt #33
Hypothetic Realist@Deviant Art
i keep the lamps low
so the shadows
are not so clear
people say I'm addled
and keep me here
i keep the lamps low
to chase the shadows away
The Watchers never see
all the shadows
that keep me company
i keep the lamps low
10 comments:
Its like hiding our emotions from the world.
Powerful repetition, there is something both haunting and lonely about this beautifully done
LOVE LOVE this Gail. Hug B
Wow Gail this is incredible. I wish you an awesome weekend!
I keep the lamps low to, but it is because i am afraid of the dark.. can't sleep in a dark room, and also i like the way a room looks with lamps low when i am awake..
i like it. eerie and creepy but i like it.
Very mood provoking. Gave me chills which of course I like.
PS I keep the lamps turned high to keep the shadows away.
It has a touch of madness to it and that is what makes it so real.
Kinda scary . . . those shadows!
Good one!
I'm get more meaning from each read. Great Write.
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