This makes me think of Edgar Allen Poe.
That's almost like stumbling into a conversation. Each couplet sparks different ideas.
I agree with Liza, shades of Poe here today
A female pusher, and 'she's more.' Quick and dirty, a nice read, Gail...
This is wonderful. Thanks dear lady.
Well done !
It's not just about a sweet smile.. there are dangers also elsewhere.
wonderful words created for the images!!! it feels a little frisky!!!
Love that ending!
Should have listened to that crow.
Yeah this has me imagining. Very nice!
I like that line- She's mad but she's magic - nicely incorporated into your poem.
Pretty cool response to this prompt. And I agree with others that there are elements of Poe here. Not surprising, considering your "dark side.";)
It's creepy and has a melancholy feel but so well written and illustrated by the photos.
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