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Death By Chocolate
Driving until my eyes wouldn’t stay open I stopped at a motel for the night. Entering my room I tried to settle in but I couldn’t shake that uneasy feeling that I was being watched.
I checked then rechecked the lock, the deadbolt. No one was getting into my room.
In my rush to leave I hadn’t eaten so I ordered something chocolate, my cure for anything.
“Room Service!” was muffled by the thickness of the door. Through the peep hole I saw the eye. No more chocolate pie for me I thought as the door crashed to the floor.
16 comments:
Great! Chocolate can do that to a lot of women I know!...:)JP
lol!
waiting for the rest of the story... hope she got her chocolate before whatever happened happened. LOVE this one, you done better than good.
Yikes. I'm gonna think twice before I order room service again...especially in October!
;)
That's a great twist to death by chocolate:@)
Nice one ! I still like my chocolate though lol !
eeep....how freaky to look through the peephole and seeing an eye looking back at you, you know....death by chocolate indeed....ha....add some peanut butter and you have me....smiles.
Yikes!
I am reading this all on my own in the middle of the night. It's a good thing that I don't scare easily, lol.
Is it safe to come out from under my bed yet?! Excellent centus!
I used to travel on my own all the time for work and room service was something I never used because of the fear I had about who would turn up, now you've reinforced that all the more thanks :)
God one!
Try that again . . .
GOOD ONE,
Ahhh! What we'll go through for chocolate!!!
A new twist on "ordering room service". I got a little chill! Well done!
yikes! Yikes!
This brings back the few scary movies I've seen in my life.
I just want to keep looking over my shoulder.
And I'm glad it's daylight when I'm reading this!
Great writing!
Creepy concept!
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