The prompt is to limit your piece to only ten words, if I read it correctly, with any theme. I am too verbose to say anything in just ten words but I gave it a shot. I could not stop with one! Surprised?
1.
Catching snowflakes
on the tongue is
a winter sporting event
2.
Each moment with you
enhances the truth
you are my life
3.
In my dream
home glass is
warm
thick
always clean
Giving it a shot. That's what life's all about...trying. (And that's another ten!) Happy Weekend.
17 comments:
in my dreams made me laugh!
This is an interesting form; almost American haiku. I may have to play with this one.
About that glass...yes.
hurrah for trying something new...... and finding out it's fun and you're good at it. Happy Weekend my friend, Oma Linda
Oh I'm glad you linked. Isn't the tenWord a great exercise for tight writing. I'm going to try it with some of my self-rejected manuscripts--things I've edited out of novels etc.
I specially admire that last one ~ Winter is so cold here that I don't dare stick out my tongue, ha ~
my ten word question is why would I try this?
there I did it. but WHY? Why, why Did I?
LOL I am not a poet and I do know it...
i talk like a machine gun and just like that gun it is hard to stop me once I get going...
All three of them tell a story all on their own, but you could easily read them altogether just as well. You did a good job incorporating this challenge into your own personal writing style.
Keeping it to just ten words is next to impossible.
Writing something with a limit of a few words is really challenging. I should know. I wrote some 6-word stories too.
Bravo to you for writing 3 amazing ones. :)
Well done ! Thanks for sharing , Have a good day !
You were on a roll! Well done!
Okay, now I need to clean my windows! Great job. Have a lovely weekend.
Oh, I enjoyed them all, Gail. Well done!
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I really liked one
made me remember
my snowflake fun . . .
When TEN words are going to make a difference, Eh
Oh super sweet- all of your tens! Great job. Enjoy your weekend.
Neat idea! Good ones!
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