Celebrating number thirteen Play It Again with Imaginary Garden With Real Toads I chose to repeat the challenge by Mama Zen to create some Twitter poetry limited to 140 characters total. I didn't get the stanzas correct but I think I have it exactly by pulling my bits and pieces of thoughts on paper hoping they make sense. This was fun!!!
Tigers wild
Tigers tame
Tigers gone
Who's to blame?
Wrapped in night
Orion flew
To rescue us
From ourselves
Awakened
Covered
With cobwebs
And regrets
10 comments:
I tried to count "characters" . . . gave up, BELIEVE YOU,
liked it too . . .
good job..
Gail, you have some interesting analogies here. From the tigers in the beginning to the spider webbing at the end. Definitely something different.
Very different verse from the "cobwebs" of your mind! Like it.
covered with cobwebs and regrets… Great ending.
I specially like that last one ~ What a challenge, smiles ~
I specially like that last one ~ What a challenge, smiles ~
Cobwebs of regrets... Oh that's so true
I too like the ending of cobwebs and regrets.
I really like the last stanza.
=)
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