There was a rock
And there he laid
Alone he thought
And talked aloud
"I wish to be
Important somehow."
His fairy godmother heard him
(We all have them you know)
They know our deepest wishes
They're always sure to show
The fairy godmother
Waved her wand
To add a little sparkle
To the rock she sat upon
The rock shared his wishes
To make a difference in the world
Fairy godmother said,
"You do!" as she whirled
"Do you not know
What great things you've done?
You were liquid, then a giant mass
Here for millions of years in the past"
"The animals have visited
to lay on you and warm
Many have sheltered beneath
And came to no harm"
The rock listens
But he didn't understand
The importance of his existence
On this spot of land
"What is so important
about being?" he asked.
"I want to make a different
I want to take life fast."
"Oh my dear rock, my friend
You haven't got a clue
Of the things you've given Earth
Of all the things you do!"
"The rains made you smaller
Parts of you become the land
The ice has broken you apart
So you could fit in a hand"
"Your carry your history within you
You once lived on an ocean's floor
You are full of history
And so very much more."
Then a child happened by,
Every one grew quiet
Cause if the world knew they talk
There would certainly be a riot.
"Oh, Mom, look! It's a pretty rock."
He picked it up, held it with a squint
Saw fossils, sparkles and smiled
Into his pocket it went.
Fairy godmother whispered
Happily to the rock
"Now you know being loved
That's the best job for a rock."
For the prompt at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Go Grimm
30 comments:
This is so perfect! I love your closing. I'm a deep lover of rocks so this spoke to me, Gail! Lovely work!
What a delightful poem - I have a whole new perspective on rocks now!
Lynne x
I love this. I wrote a poem about the spirit in a stone years ago, and had some of these same sentiments. I have always been a lover of rocks, so this poem really resonates with me.
I really enjoyed this lovely story - again - another poem from this prompt today that I can imagine illustrated and published.
I love love love love IT!!!! so you and what a really good story... this could be put in a childrens book with illustrations.
From one rock lover to another, I love it!! :) And thank you Gail...
that's one happy rock...what a great poem
What a lovely poem - I do enjoy visiting your blog.
Hope your weekend goes well.
All the best Jan
yeah yeah, i luv me a good fairy tale and your rhyming is perfect
much love...
Oh this is delightful..! :D
Loved it!
xoxo
I'm running out of superlatives today!!! Amazing! How on earth did you come up with this? And I'm so happy the rock finally got it in the end (well, he must have)... Delightful and stunning.
Adorable! Sometimes rocks can be very stubborn and need lots of convincing. :D
:) Have you ever had a "pet rock" Gail? :) What a sweet story. Everything is worthy, yes?
Beautifully stellar - worthy of a comparison to Shel Silverstein, this was excellent.
I am so happy I met you, know you, call you my friend . . .
This was "goose bumpy "wonderful!
It reminded me of Shel Silverstein's book The Giving Tree!
For those I have not replied to by email, thank you so very much.
What an intriguing tale you have weaved with this rock.. wonderful.
Very nice!
We all have our special place here, including rocks. Well done!
I am clapping here , bravo , bravo well done my friend I really enjoyed this ! Thanks for sharing , have a good weekend !
Ahhh! What a satisfying poem!
Love your ending...the best thing for anyone, anything is to be loved.
What a wonderful job, Gail. Well done! ♥
Bravo, this was wonderful it had that Shel Silverstein quality!
I love it~
It's a nice take, Gail. Great minds? My heroine was also a fairy godmother. They are fun to write about.
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This is really charming, Gail. I think my new favorite of yours. Well done!
Truly delightful and charming......smiling as I read. Only a true collector could write something as brilliant as this. Exactly what us rock collector's feel. lol
As a fellow rock lover, you know this one speaks to me!
=)
A great poem on the importance of perspective. And I, too, am a lover of rocks :-)
You have a great way with words. This was fun to read.
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