a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Sunday, April 5, 2015

Packing


Carefully packing...
Dispute, crack and war
In a strong suitcase
Pounding to escape
Couldn't fathom
The noise the trio could make
Enough!
Eating fruit
Writing parables
Listening to birdsong
Trying to save the world
Carefully packing.,.

16 comments:

T. Powell Coltrin said...

Okay, THIS is now my favorite. Great job using all those words to come up with this masterpiece.

Teresa

Delores said...

packing is no fun.....travelling is no fun....arriving at your destination is a blast.

TexWisGirl said...

oh, i like it!

Keith's ramblings said...

This is great!

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Imagine if you'd packed trouble as well!

Lux G. said...

Packing is the downside of traveling. Actually, no. Unpacking is. At least for me.:)

Happy Easter!

Old Egg said...

How important it is to decide the life we want ourselves and put aside the negatives and enjoy life.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

What interesting items to pack in a suitcase! Someone wiser than I would have to handle those items. (I'm terrible when it comes to packing for trips.)


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humbird said...

Witty! and I love to read in both directions too!~ very cool :)

Terri @ Coloring Outside the Lines said...

Very good! Happy Easter!!

McGuffy Ann Morris said...

I like this. I was inspired by the word prompts and wrote a piece. I don't know if I will post it, though. I love writing prompts. Even when I don't share (because I am hard on myself), they make me work.
Thanks for sharing!

Marty Damon said...

Two suitcases with very different contents.

Saucy Kodz said...

Really well done on this one with all those difficult words. This one is the best by far "Word Prompt".

Lynne said...

Well done my friend . . .

Jae Rose said...

Although this could be seen as a regular task...there is much more at the bottom of the suitcase if you tear the layers apart!

A Quiet Corner said...

Nice header besides the witty use of words!...:)JP

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