I thought, What in the world could I talk about, using the proper form, that would fill five required triplets and an ending quatrain? Well, I do have six dogs....pictures in order of age, oldest to the pup.
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I declare dogs are smart
Strong workers with big hearts
I declare dogs are smart
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No matter the color, breed or age
They win you over from the start
Strong workers with big hearts
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Size nor breed matters not
Loving canines with big hearts
They win you over from the start
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Many are thrown away
When given a new place to stay
Loving canines with big hearts
A true announcer in every way
Running free living large
When given a new place to stay
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A true announcer in every way
Strong workers with big hearts
I declare dogs are smart
Running free living large
THIS WAS TOO MUCH LIKE WORK!
Still not sure if I have the form right.
I could use some advice.
15 comments:
LOVE the dog pics and I get this one from start to finish but Oh My Dogs OMD OMD i read the description of what the word is that starts with T and got so upset i started to cry... well not really but i did get frustrated because i could not figure it out. I will just live in my world under the poetry rock and let you and others write the poems.
LOVE the dog pics and I get this one from start to finish but Oh My Dogs OMD OMD i read the description of what the word is that starts with T and got so upset i started to cry... well not really but i did get frustrated because i could not figure it out. I will just live in my world under the poetry rock and let you and others write the poems.
evidently i do KNOW HOW TO COMMENT in tripilcate..
i don't know about poetry form, but i agree with you on pups!
Who cares, don't worry it's perfect in my eyes, and so darn true. If only we humans could be totally described so well! Bravo! Hello sweet pups you brighten my day.
Lovely photos; sweet dogs. :)
I don't know the form, but you did a great job with the poem!
You have lost me on the form, Gail, but I sure enjoyed seeing the dogs out having a good time.
Right or not, matters not to me. I loved it, Gail.
Sorry to hear about your Poetry Jam. That is sad.
Have a blessed day and stay dry!
You have a very diverse pack. You definitely are not locked into a particular breed. They all have their charm and ability to claim a heart don't they?
I know nothing about poetry form--looked perfect to me.
Gail that is wonderful! And I LOVE you choice of subject! :o) I have only one dog at present, and have had as many as three. I can't imagine six though! What a pet party that must be!
What a variety of dogs, all healthy and on the run.
Your poems do not need to have a form and such--they are a reflection of who you are, and that means they are darn good.
I shall not comment in triplicate, I shall not comment in triplicate, I shall not comment in triplicate - however; I did enjoy the poem and always love seeing your buddies, eh. lol H to M
That looked complicated, but you pulled it off. Smart to do it on your dogs.
Not a poet critique but LOVE your doggies!
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