Lovely cycle of life poem. It's quite profound, Gail. By the way, this isn't linked to Magpie Tales.
It is linked. I hadn't refreshed my page.
May be a computer gremlin day, Other Mary. Your comments did not show in my email.
Oh, I hope too that it is still possible to rebirth a balanced world. We have gone so far away from that direction I do wonder...
I followed the link here. Love your take it's heartfelt and intense. ♥
A very powerful & intense imagery in this poem..!!Loved it! :DHappy Sunday..!xoxo
I like the connection to mother nature Gail ~ I hope we take care of nature ~
Those closing lines are so powerful. I hope that too.
I like the cycle here and the rebirth of a balanced world.Donna@LivingFromHappiness
The last three lines work so nicely and pack a punch..I hope a balanced world can be found.
Very good. We are indeed all connected. : )
The world seems so out of balance that this rebirth is exactly what it needs!
We are the spawn of the sea, where our first phases of creation happened, & now through neglect & disrespect, we are poisoning our mother; I share in your hopes for the future.
Great poem of a life's cycle.
The big connection - damaging ourselves constantly.
cycle of life.. it flows like water.. and we def should find some balance.
A world in balance; what we all hope for.
I stared at the picture and got nothing, but you hit the nail on the head with thisIn time to rebirth A balanced worldit fits the fish swimming inside her dress.. perfectly
What a hope that is...elemental..universal...and a beautiful poem
it flows beautifully !
The pic looks bland. Could not really make it out. But you gave it life Gail!Hank
"Hoping we awaken"...yes the last refuge...a beautiful & timely poem..love how you translated the image ...
The Circle of Life leaves memories in the memories of our blood and soul. How beautifully you show it. ♥
The painting and poem mesh perfectly.
Loved this, Gail :) 'A balanced world'. That's a lovely thought.
My hopes all about balanced world...
Rebirth a balanced world . . . well done Gail!
We all and call for a balanced world. It may be impossible but possible when all the elements aligned
What the sea wants , the sea shall have
Great gads, I have to get over to view this and post mine. Once I saw it was our Mag I had to quick write this comment. I'll be back, after I write mine.
Earthy and lovely...
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