painting by Daria Petrilli
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Baring the truth
We are connected
When Mother cries
We taste tears
Birth life death
The cycle slows
Losing ground
Share the blame
Without honor
Hoping we awaken
In time to rebirth
A balanced world
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Lovely cycle of life poem. It's quite profound, Gail. By the way, this isn't linked to Magpie Tales.
It is linked. I hadn't refreshed my page.
May be a computer gremlin day, Other Mary. Your comments did not show in my email.
Oh, I hope too that it is still possible to rebirth a balanced world. We have gone so far away from that direction I do wonder...
I followed the link here. Love your take it's heartfelt and intense. ♥
A very powerful & intense imagery in this poem..!!
Loved it! :D
Happy Sunday..!
xoxo
I like the connection to mother nature Gail ~ I hope we take care of nature ~
Those closing lines are so powerful. I hope that too.
I like the cycle here and the rebirth of a balanced world.
Donna@LivingFromHappiness
The last three lines work so nicely and pack a punch..I hope a balanced world can be found.
Very good. We are indeed all connected. : )
The world seems so out of balance that this rebirth is exactly what it needs!
We are the spawn of the sea, where our first phases of creation happened, & now through neglect & disrespect, we are poisoning our mother; I share in your hopes for the future.
Great poem of a life's cycle.
The big connection - damaging ourselves constantly.
cycle of life.. it flows like water.. and we def should find some balance.
A world in balance; what we all hope for.
I stared at the picture and got nothing, but you hit the nail on the head with this
In time to rebirth
A balanced world
it fits the fish swimming inside her dress.. perfectly
What a hope that is...elemental..universal...and a beautiful poem
it flows beautifully !
The pic looks bland. Could not really make it out. But you gave it life Gail!
Hank
"Hoping we awaken"...yes the last refuge...a beautiful & timely poem..love how you translated the image ...
The Circle of Life leaves memories in the memories of our blood and soul. How beautifully you show it. ♥
The painting and poem mesh perfectly.
Loved this, Gail :) 'A balanced world'. That's a lovely thought.
My hopes all about balanced world...
Rebirth a balanced world . . . well done Gail!
We all and call for a balanced world. It may be impossible but possible when all the elements aligned
What the sea wants , the sea shall have
Great gads, I have to get over to view this and post mine. Once I saw it was our Mag I had to quick write this comment. I'll be back, after I write mine.
Earthy and lovely...
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