STOP!
Fight not with tooth and nail
Vent your rage softly
Brush it out set it free
Sink not into madness
The weight of the world
Is not yours to bear alone
Take a page from life's book
When the sun's light
Reflects in mirror or spoon
Ravish the sweet orange
Cement
Your dreams
13 comments:
That is very well done, just with a buncha words. I like this poem very much. lol
I really like this...some good advice from a group of random words.
The sweet cement of bright orange dreams...i love this - very much!
well done!
can you hear this?
Clap! Clap! Clap! I like this a lot. don't know how you come up with this from just words.
Love your parting thought...We all need to work on cementing our dreams!!
Hi Gail, it's been awhile! Are you still collecting rocks? I am! This last picture is so stunning, the flower is gorgeous! And your whirligig is so clever, I could never think of something like this. Well, as to your question about my moon pictures, I did not use a removable lens. I have a super zoom camera. No extra lens needed.
Awesome, Gail!
Random words glued together is a vision. Very nice.
Gail, that's brilliant! To use those words in such a short piece yet produce something so amazing is unbelievable.
Love your constructive approach! Great! I see how much fun you had with the words :)x
Really liked . . .
The person who can vent his or her rage softly is one to be avoided at all costs!
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