Blinking from the sun
Their night of hunting
Was productive and done
Gray asked Orange,
“How was the taste?”
Orange extended his tongue
meowing, “What a waste!”
Discussing the varied menu
Mice or lovely bird
After much discussion
They declared it was absurd
They reverted to kibble-eating
And voted to stay inside.
21 comments:
Smart cats! Or lazy. One of the two.
That was cute ! Have a good day !
I LOVE IT!!! this is my most favorite of all your challenge writing... fits that pic perfect and made me smile...
lazy bums. :)
hahaha my cat def eats the live stuff on occassion....and tears up the kibble as well..a fun interaction you captured...
Gail, You did just fine!
I inherited the Friday Flash Fiction prompt from Susie about 5 years ago, and it's grown into a fine little circle of friends. I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!
In regards to your post...
Those are just like my 3 cats!!!
Great pic to go along with your little ditty. Writing a story with a plot and a central character in only 55 words, sharpens your skills, and makes you become more succinct. Fantastic job!
Loved your Feline 55.
Please join us again next Friday, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
Sweet picture.....it's safer inside anyway....Francine.
Smart cats, don't have to work for their food. Instead just stay inside and have a little kibble ;-)
They know that kibble doesn't put up a fight and they don't have to work for it!...:)JP
DELIGHTFUL! Purrfect picture too! :-) I love the whole concept of a kitty conversation about the night's events.
Oh good find in a challenge. I like your kitty tale. B
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I keep my cat inside so he does not eat the poor little birds. He slobbers when he watched them out of the window, my little assassin.
Ah, that's a fun one...and such cute kitties! And I had no trouble getting here, you left your message at the right place. :o)
Haha.
Smart kitties.
That's what we did the last few days, too.
Good one, Gail! <3
Aw, that was a sweet poem! I love the picture as well.
very cool cats...and smart too.
Blessings
Cute, sweet and smooth . . .
Hehe! So cute :) Sounds like those kittens must have wore themselves out!
Delightful story, well told.
=)
Great Poem, and the cats are very smart. Great Job Gail - again!
I had to call an exterminator for a mouse problem in my house years ago in Michigan. We lived next to a field. He walked around and said I had a problem. I fed my three cats too much store bought food :)
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