Tess Kincaid's words, not mine. Tess posts challenge us each Sunday to reach through our self-imposed barricades drawing out the hidden words giving them life to share with others.
So reach deep, keep it nice and create. For more creations visit The Mag.
Hand in hand
We adventure
Trusting blindly
The safety of two
Hand in hand
Our heart skips
As we do
The safety of two
Hand in hand
There are no limits
Creating within
The safety of two
Hand in hand
Dusk approaches
Returning home
The safety of two.
Hand in hand
Awaiting our return
Back lit silhouettes copy
The safety of two.
20 comments:
Sooooo good!
smiles....comforting, gentle...i like this...nice visuals on the siloquettes in the end as well...
Great comfort in the repetition. Enjoyed it.
This is lovely Gail, and the repetition of the last line really adds to the message.
Well planned and well written...
Safety of two! thanks.
There is a wonderful spiritual using the words hand in hand. Something like "Hand in hand, we will go, to the world, hand in hand." Your poem reminded me of it.
Beautifully done, Gail! I loved it!
Wonderful post today, Gail! :o)
Perfect, and effectively spoken! Your words bond the strength of two hearts into one!
It seems so warm and trusting..hmm..safety of two..makes it a lasting "one"! :-)
oh.yes, the safety of two .so fantastic
So sweet to have that partner in life....definitely a safe feeling for two.
Well captured.
Hugs
SueAnn
I like the pattern of this poem Gail, and the repetition really works. The safety of two has a ring to it doesn't it?
Love love love the safety of two...
love the rhythm and safety of two!
I love the repetition, Gail...AND the words you chose to repeat.
=)
Two by two .... yes.
That felt quite nostalgic for me - the safety of two. I'm an identical twin!
I always have my younger kids go out in twos. Well done
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