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Art by Joseph Lorruso
The battle of the caffeines
Was a scary tale
Coffee or soda
Who wins?
Hard to tell.
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The condiments were talking
About the view
No one needed seasoning
Enough spice here
For me and you.
The hands explored the moment
From top to almost tail
There was no spot
Left untouched
In this meeting
Of the pales.
The end remains yours
To decide
The moment
Hangs in time
Forever
On the canvas
Forever
On the mind.
Linking with Magpie Tales.
28 comments:
Definitely some spice involved in this one.
Cute!
=)
You have a new header, I like it. I also like your poem and how you concentrated on every detail of the art.
That was great. Playful and it read so well.
haha...fun read...coffee wins...hands down...or up...or on...or...
I like how you zeroed in on the details. That was not an obvious thing to do. Are you taking lessons? xox
Love your attention to the detail!
Oh, I love it, I love it, that's wonderful!
Well done! Love the painting also.
You nailed this one- fantastic prose!
Perhaps the drink is absinthe ?
I like how you took parts of the painting to create this poem.
very nice, Gail!!!
LOVE IT.... so much better than my first thought of Hey, get a room... great job. again
Who knew the condiments had a voice - and such eloquence!
Oh yes, all that heavy exploring spiced up a few lines as they huddled together! Lovely poem of sweet love!
that works so well breaking up the art like that, such depth of story
I wrote something to go with the picture and then backed off. I began reading things others had written and realized I was WAY over my sometimes "big" head. I am NOT a writer and certainly not a poet. :( Love to write..but poetry leaves me with my face hanging out. I was married to both and like to think I learned something. But...naw...I didn't.
You did great on this. LOVED it. NO nerve to post mine. lol
Hugs,
Mona
cool how you did the pictures. very very cool
Interesting dissection of the painting.
Love how you included attention to so many details. I did notice that coffee cup - I kept wanting to push it further back up on the table!
I love the way you both dissected and connected this one in an excellent composition of photo focus and verse. Very well done Miss Gail! :-)
Beautiful and ahh loved the creativity so much!
Nice way to manage a prompt!
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A neat concept, to divide the painting and to construct tiny chapters. This works well.
Timeless! I did note battle of soda and coffee! great all round perspective! thanks-
I really would have loved to hear how it went after the appetizers were served.
What a fun response to the prompt!
Wonder what ketchup had to say...
I love the last five lines! Well done.
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