Imagine Venus with drawers
She already had a cloth
What she needed was arms
But at her loss we scoff
Dali gave her knobs instead
And places to hide your stuff
Although this adds depth and use
Having arms would be a plus
I admire Dali's talent
But fear inside his head
I would add a one drawer wonder
By installing a jack-in-the-box instead
30 comments:
Thank you . . . I am giggling . . ."jack in the box " instead!
Good fun and nicely done!
i agree with the jack in the box.. great job. AGAIN
Clever and humorous. What was Dali thinking?
Yeah, without arms, how the heck do you open drawers? A clever rhyme.
And your header is a blog opener, too.
Oh this was fun to read. I have a big smile now. What a nice way to spend Sunday morning.
Fun read.
Hahahahaha---Oh, Gail, that sense of humor of yours is priceless!
A lot of great fun from this one. Enjoyed that.
This was a fun read!
made me laugh. :)
A jack-in-the-box... how fun!
LOL! Got my chuckle for the day!...:)JP
Having arms would be a plus ?!
Love this observation. :-)
Incredibly clever response to Dali's absurdity!
oh hohohoho Jack-in-the-box...
everyone is having fun with this weeks prompt- very cheeky!
I`ve always thought that Dali was OTT so really appreciate this tremendously funny poem.
You certainly rose to the challenge!
POP goes the weasel ... certainly fits the Dali image!!! :-)
So I have this vivid imagery of the jack-in-the box Venus de Dali - it is capable of becoming nightmarish!
Hahahahaha!!!!!
Have a great week, Gail! ♥
Great verse. I really like it. Yes, she only needed arms and he gave her all these knobs instead! Last stanza is great.
Heehee - love the jack-in-the-box idea!
Bravo- I don't even believe Dali would have thought of that Jack-in-the-box - but imagine how cool it would be!
Cleverly done and the Jack-in-the-box...would be fun!
He has made Venus look silly, so a Jack in the box would have been perfect.
Yup! I'm with Jack and his box, too!
she could definitely use arms... & i agree with you about Dali
Oh the wonders the lurked inside Dali's head...
hahaha
=D
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