My random words were supplied by grandsons: ass, dog, cut, sleep, hit, lazy, sleepy, fuzzy, football, guitar.
This will surely be a challenge.
I almost hit the lazy dog
If I were not an ass
I would sleep
Pull over
Let my fuzzy mind
Recover
From a day
Filled with football
And guitar
And dreams.
For dVerse Poets Pub
16 comments:
You met the challenge and then some. Great poem. (and what is it with boys and behinds?)
Well done, Gail!
=)
Impressive to combine all the words in such a concise form!
smiles...a day filled with football, guitar and dreams doesn't sound like a bad day at all to me...smiles..and i'm glad you didn't hit the dog.. cool words provided by your grandson..smiles
you did it, and did it well....
Sounds like a day with the grandsons had some inspiration. Good one!
hahahaha...they gave you ass....and you did well with it...lol....ah, they do have a way of wearing you out now dont they....this i understand...smiles.
You worked that very well!
Well done and I think this sounds just like Andrew. ha,ha
if someone had told me to take 10 random words and turn them into an 11 line poem, I would have thought them a cookie or two short of a full packet ;-)
You do a fantastic job though. I could not help but smile as I read it.
That picture is rather poetic, too!
Ha - so glad the dog was spared!
you pulled it off well!
OMG Look at all the Chemtrails in the picture. Good shot of them. Yesterday, here, too, the deep blue sky became criss-crossed with chemtrails in mid afternoon and I get sick at heart when I see them but it's every day.
Good poem....You did it Kiddo.
Well done! You rose to that challenge!
You knocked it out of the park!
Great use of all the words the grandsons supplied you with.
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