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Not feeling like yourself?
Some one lets a dog in...
I freeze but the dog
Thinks I am only human
And does not smell my fear
Someone mentions food
I look at the solid wood
I stand on
Seeing nothing to eat
The lead male says,
"Honey, I will cook.
Go relax"
I retreat outside
22 comments:
Let him do the cooking!
if the meaning of this is let bob do the cooking, i say amen sista
This is absolutely a treat, and exactly what I was asking for. The whole thing is a delight. Thank you!
Lovely! You captured the feeling of finding yourself in the completely wrong environment.
Another wonderful poem!
Lynne x
This picture gives you the illusion the deer has very long legs.
Love this poem, and the picture.
Oh what a sweetie could I borrow him I love men that cook:) Great poem hug B
How great is that...love it, :) Francine.
Yes...relax...outside!
"I retreat outside" gives me hope that she will escape the wood floors, and find food.
K
Love it!!
This is so clever! Well done!
Great piece, Gail. :-) ♥
As always very nice.
I live in a part of the country where deer are everywhere ... strolling across streets, strolling down the sidewalk in front of my townhome, nibbling in our yards. Some think they are 'pests' .. I have an on-going love affair with them. Love your poem, Gail!!
Hi Gail I love your take on the prompt~ You are so clever ;D
Well Done!
Spot on! lol
And I wonder, just what he will cook?!
What did the man cook?
I LOVE this! Written to perfection!
Clever writing, Gail!
=)
Delightful n cute. Sure honey, let me do the cooking for you - Does TM say that every now n then :)
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