a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Monday, July 22, 2013

Feel The Heat at Poetry Jam

I feel the heat
Bone deep and soul wide
I dive into your coolness
Open-eyed
Welcoming the relief
Surfacing
I feel the heat

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14 comments:

Country Gal said...

Wonderful !

TexWisGirl said...

'soul wide'. like it!

Brian Miller said...

quick
duck under again
smiles.

nothing like the cool kiss of the swimming hole to break the heat...

Deb said...

love it

Lynne said...

Really nice . . . very . . . soul wide!

Dip-Dip and the Bridge said...

I can almost feel the searing sun on my head!
Is that pond yours or is it near where you live?
Lynne x

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

No relief when the pool or pond are bath water temperatures.

Nancy said...

What a wonderful place to refresh and renew! Love your poem.

Sandra said...

I feel the heat,
it makes me crazy.
I feel the heat,
it makes me lazy.
I feel the heat
outside in the yard.
I feel the heat
and i look like LARD

Sue said...

bone deep and soul wide.

Nice turn of phrase, Gail.

=)

Sandee said...

Very well done, but you know sometimes the water is all heat too. Not often, but sometimes.

Have a terrific day. ☺

LindaG said...

Lovely scenery and a great little piece, Gail. :-)

Loredana Donovan said...

Love the reflections in your photo, beautiful ... and a lovely poem. Thanks for your visit :)

Sam Edge said...

perfect dive in a lake

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