At The Farm...: Feel The Heat at Poetry Jam

Monday, July 22, 2013

Feel The Heat at Poetry Jam

I feel the heat

Bone deep and soul wide

I dive into your coolness

Open-eyed

Welcoming the relief

Surfacing

I feel the heat

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12 comments:

TexWisGirl said...: 'soul wide'. like it!; July 22, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Brian Miller said...: quick
duck under again
smiles.

nothing like the cool kiss of the swimming hole to break the heat...; July 22, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Deb said...: love it; July 22, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Lynne said...: Really nice . . . very . . . soul wide!; July 22, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Sketching with Dogs said...: I can almost feel the searing sun on my head!
Is that pond yours or is it near where you live?
Lynne x; July 23, 2013 at 2:13 AM
Alex J. Cavanaugh said...: No relief when the pool or pond are bath water temperatures.; July 23, 2013 at 5:44 AM
Nancy said...: What a wonderful place to refresh and renew! Love your poem.; July 23, 2013 at 6:27 AM
MadSnapper said...: I feel the heat,
it makes me crazy.
I feel the heat,
it makes me lazy.
I feel the heat
outside in the yard.
I feel the heat
and i look like LARD; July 23, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Susan Anderson said...: bone deep and soul wide.

Nice turn of phrase, Gail.

=); July 23, 2013 at 9:02 AM
Sandee said...: Very well done, but you know sometimes the water is all heat too. Not often, but sometimes.

Have a terrific day. ☺; July 23, 2013 at 9:21 AM
LindaG said...: Lovely scenery and a great little piece, Gail. :-); July 23, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Unknown said...: perfect dive in a lake; July 24, 2013 at 5:29 AM

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