I love this one, it is so dark, it reminds me of Virginia Woolf although she drowned in a river. There is a high cliff near us that many persons have gone over in despair. Lynne x
This was very good... intense, and so very real. We stand on the cliff and we sink into the water with her. The concern is what state she will find herself in on the other side, will the light be welcoming, or will long for it's warmth as she wanders in the cold?
I try not to wonder how I will die. Hopefully at home with children around me. How terrible to realize you are really not alone..just as you die. Had me scratching my head..but also food for serious thought. I agree with Outlawer, very sad. And yet....and yet...
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We are never alone even though sometimes we think we are.
Very well done.
Have a blessed Sunday. ☺
to dark, way to dark.. well written words, but way to dark...and scary
shivers...
kinda sad its only in the end she does not feel alone....
No, we're never along up there :)
I love this one, it is so dark, it reminds me of Virginia Woolf although she drowned in a river.
There is a high cliff near us that many persons have gone over in despair.
Lynne x
This was very good... intense, and so very real. We stand on the cliff and we sink into the water with her. The concern is what state she will find herself in on the other side, will the light be welcoming, or will long for it's warmth as she wanders in the cold?
Creepy...chills going down my spine...
Oh, this makes me think of Virginia Woolf.
Well done although very chilly . . .
Your poetry always knows how to dig deep and bring a reaction.
Hey love sometimes at the endless lonely is endless oneness Love yea friend those are lovely words.
Beautifully written and scary to boot! I would never want to die by drowning! I'm afraid of water!
The ending verse gave me goosebumpts ~ Good or bad, its nice to know we are not alone ~
We never walk alone! Well done!
Yup dark. But it's you.
Good job, Gail. :-)
Oh dear-- very sad. k.
I try not to wonder how I will die. Hopefully at home with children around me. How terrible to realize you are really not alone..just as you die. Had me scratching my head..but also food for serious thought.
I agree with Outlawer, very sad.
And yet....and yet...
Eyes open
inhaling only.
Only in the final moments finding peace...very sad, but very well done and quite a punch in this.
whew...ominous! ...shivers...
You and your dark side. This was chilling.
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