a tale of tails, tenacity, and tedium, as told by me, usually barefoot and bellowing

Sunday, January 17, 2016

Skeletons


When the mouth
does not keep step
with the head
skeletons may spill

change is possible
as a gift in the present
but when the moon
is wired does it explode?

9 comments:

gld said...

Gail, I rarely comment on the poetry ones....I am totally poetry challenged. I read them though. Have a good Sunday!

Sandra said...

love this one...my mouth is always ahead of my head/mind and spilling what ever comes out with no way to pull it back..

Lynne said...

I read it a few times . . .
and how you pull something out
that makes sense . . .
amazing.
I look at the word scramble
and only see
scramble . . .

eileeninmd said...

Good morning, I am amazed at what you can do with this scramble of words. LOL, I always try to keep in step with my head! Happy Sunday, have a happy new week ahead!

Lowcarb team member said...

I don't know how you do it - but you do it well!
I do like this 'Sunday Swirl-Wordle!

All the best Jan

Plowing Through Life (Martha) said...

Great job with this! And I had a good laugh with
"When the mouth
does not keep step
with the head
skeletons may spill"

So true!

Lowcarb team member said...

Hi Gail - just read your comment on the low carb blog regarding this 'goof'.... a very good goof, which your readers are enjoying!

Hope your Sunday is going well, I'm just about to make a nice refreshing cup of tea!

Take Care

All the best Jan

Karen S. said...

just the thought of a wired moon makes me smile! Of course I'm stuck in a deep freeze so it doesn't take much to pull me to any light! hehehe!

Susan Anderson said...

You have gotten super good at these. This one is seamless and smart.

=)

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